Tuesday, 24 May 2016

On the edge of your seat ...

Look out J. K. Rowling, you have some serious competition here!  Lex, Henry and Gabrielle have written dramatic stories about a cave and from the opening phrase, they have you hooked.  Their vocabulary choices, punctuation and story structure are worthy of going into print and the content will have you on the edge of your seat.  Excellent writing, folks!

1 comment:

Henners said...

Very proud of Henry getting his special achievers award, he has worked really hard his year improving his writing, Henry loves to read lots off different books which has improved his writing thanks a very proud mum and dad