Thursday 17 December 2015

Hot off the press

This is an amazing piece of work from Skyla.  She has met all the success criteria in writing a most effective newspaper report about the discovery of Tutankhamun's tomb, and Miss Leftley and I were particularly impressed by her use of punctuation.  Well done you!

Poor Monty!

There is no way anyone could resist the request Sophie and Rosie have made to Santa.  Poor Monty desperately wants a friend and after Santa has read their persuasive letters, he is bound to grant their wish!  Super pieces of work, girls!

Wednesday 9 December 2015

Read all about it ...

Mr Santy has been very sneaky with his success criteria for this piece of work, but Caitlin has managed to meet all 10 points when writing a newspaper report about the discovery of King Tut's tomb.  This is very convincing writing, Caitlin, and I really felt I was reading news that was hot off the press.  Well done you!